Lovely Haiku
In a review of William Howard Cohen's To Walk in Seasons
What I really love is the introductory line to the post: Another older book I've read recently to prepare for the fall haiku session
and I love it because I initially misread it to say: Another older book I've read recently to prepare for the haiku season
I love the thought of a haiku season, which for me, would be any season--but there's something resonant about thinking about haikus in seasons.
I'm entranced by the first of the haiku offered, and amused to the point of an out-right chuckle by the second. But all of them are strong in their own ways--go and pick your favorite, and if you're inclined to, please let me know which it is.
What I really love is the introductory line to the post: Another older book I've read recently to prepare for the fall haiku session
and I love it because I initially misread it to say: Another older book I've read recently to prepare for the haiku season
I love the thought of a haiku season, which for me, would be any season--but there's something resonant about thinking about haikus in seasons.
I'm entranced by the first of the haiku offered, and amused to the point of an out-right chuckle by the second. But all of them are strong in their own ways--go and pick your favorite, and if you're inclined to, please let me know which it is.
Steven, thanks for the nod and kind words - I forgot that not everyone is going to realize I've been talking about a one-shot haiku class I'm doing for life-long learners in the fall. The serendipity of session/seasons is rather lovely.
ReplyDeleteDon
Under the cherry shower
ReplyDeletewater down the mountain
turning stones to songs.
Onitsura
I have to go with this one.
"turning stones to songs"
a very strong line--stones + water: song
Dear Don,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for such a wonderful post, and indeed, a wonderful site.
Fred,
I loved that one as well, for much the same reason. Thank you for letting me know.
shalom
Steven